Statement & Essay Critique

A close reading of one or two long-form pieces with notes on structure, evidence, and tone suited to Japanese and international selection panels.

From ¥42,000

Extra word count billed after confirmation

Handwriting notes beside a typed statement draft

Who it is for

Applicants who already have a complete form pack but need sharper long-form writing.

Result you receive

Margin comments plus a one-page memo of structural recommendations.

Provider

Statement specialist auditor

Duration & delivery

Three to five business days per round. Remote.

Included

  • Two rounds of written comments on up to two documents
  • Tone and audience notes for the target programme
  • Checklist of unsupported claims to revise

Outside scope

  • Ghostwriting or full rewrites
  • Proofreading of the entire dossier

How this engagement runs

  1. Submit drafts and programme brief
  2. Receive first critique in three business days
  3. Revise and return for second pass

Preparation

Near-final drafts and word limits from the programme

Constraints

Maximum 2,500 words combined per engagement at the listed rate